Stephen Jeffreys The Play Write
Valued Friends was performed at the Hampstead Theatre in 1990. He is also known for the screen play of The Libertine with actor Johnny Depp. This plays was set in the 1980s which was when Margret Thatcher became Prime Minister.
Character Study
Name: Sherry
Age: 25 "late twenties" quoted by the play
Occupation: Comedienne
Marriage status: Single
Where does Sherry live?
Sherry lives with her three friends. Paul who is a pop music journalist, Paul's girlfriend Marion and Howard who is writing in the left wing for the analysis of corruption capitalism under Thatcher. They live in a 'Victorian house in Earl's court'.
Health
Sherry is healthy besides from the smoking. In the 1980s smoking was popular for people because it wasn't a caution as we know today.
Interests
Sherry's interests are to go out drinking with her house mates and into her job trying to get the next joke. She wants stick by her friends especially Howard as she sometimes gets anxious.
'Sherry kneeling in a pile of twenty pound notes in her nightie tears streaming down her face clutching the champagne bottle'
However it all changes when she gets thrown out. Also shopping is one her interests because they are always going to the next pub for alcohol.
' Sherry is standing there. She is wears a short dress an absurd floppy hat and a huge shoulder bag.'
She likes alcohol for example 'she reaches for the champagne bottle'.
Characters objectives
She wants to be a success at comedy which will makes her happy. Hopefully she wants to be famous. 'Im happy. Im having a great time. People point me out on the tube.'
My character Sherry opens the play with this monologue. The whole monologue as how she is socially awkward on a train with this man coming towards her and asking her questions. For me personally I can relate this character slightly as I find social outings and communicating sometimes a struggle. I channelled these emotions and that made the piece feel awkward as playing the character different. The monologue includes dialogue on what the man says to Sherry. I wanted to create a voice for the man to change the pitch and add more variety to the monologue in general. Whilst I was doing the man impression I stepped out of the role of Sherry and stood up whilst saying it as Sherry was still sat on the chair. I felt that this worked as I got a laugh from the panel. Admittedly I did stumble over my words slightly as I repeated some of the lines again but I carried on in character but I think that this was just nerves and I couldn't think of what was going to come next. This monologue on the whole went well. When rehearsing I wanted to create Sherry as a slightly nervous character because in this situation the monologue is mainly about her panicking and her saying about her embarrassment.
Why did I choose this piece?
The reason I chose this character because it is a contrast to my other monologues. The other ones were a dark speech and another being in love so this is a perfect monologue to prove the contrast between all three monologues.I feel that comedy is what I am strongest at and also it gave me a challenge to think about the staging instead of a director telling me the blocking for it all. This was the first time I have done a comedic monologue which gave me a challenge to make it funny.
What would I improve about this audition?
If I were to repeat this again I would be more confident with the lines as I jumped a big chunk which threw me and I didn't know what the next part was. I needed to think more about my character and rehearse a little bit more so I became comfortable with this character. At times the nerves got the better of me but once I was in the zone with the character I felt more relaxed.
What obstacles were there throughout the process?
One of the struggles that I found was that I was I didn't know who Ingmar Bergman was. So I did some research and he is a Swedish director, producer and writer who worked in film and television.
Feedback given
My feedback was very positive for this speech. My vocal delivery was good and it was a good attempt of a comedy. I was really pleased with this feedback as I naturally acted the comedy I didn't need to 'act' the comedic parts of the speech. They did pick up on my stumbles but they liked that I carried on with the speech. The feedback also said that comedy is one of my strongest parts of my acting as I am naturally funny.
Monologue two Valerie from Road by Jim Cartwright
How did you think the monologue went?
I have done this monologue a few times now some for uni auditions and one for the actual play that I did in the first year. From the first time of doing it to the last time I did this I think I have improved with this monologue as I can see the emotions of Valerie as a character. I can feel what it is like to be on your own with the kids. This was the 80s which meant that this had to be slightly old for me and unfamiliar society.
I played around with working with this character by getting out the chocolates and a glass of wine whilst speaking in a relaxed way but fed up and tired. This worked but it felt a little unnatural for me as I felt that I was acting too much and not thinking about the character. I then thought about playing it drunk by walking in and going to the drink. I works with the time of when the play was set as the 80s was all about alcohol and sex and drugs. I couldn't play the character well as I couldn't capture acting drunk as I was over acting. Then I started to play with a subtle madness with the character and sit and stare and one part of the room and adding actions such as pulling the hair grabbing the arms to add the facial expressions to the character. This worked as I could take it slow which think that I am tired and hard worked as a house mum.
Why did you choose this monologue?
The reason why chose the monologue is that this monologue is from a older woman was is something I havent done before as an actor. I felt that I could act this character as the things she says about her husband are dark which is challenging for me. Also their is an accent in this plat which helps with a challenge too which meant that I could get into character more instead of using my natural voice.
Name: Valerie Johnson
Age:35
Martial Status: Married
Ethnicity:White British
Martial Status: Married
Ethnicity:White British
What does your character do for a living?
Valerie is a mum with three children who she picks up after in a flat whilst her husband is working for the family. Valerie doesnt see her children too much because he is drinking at the pub all the time. I know this because Valerie cant do go out and get food to provide for family because the money is spent on drinks for her husband. Valerie is a working mum at home to make sure that the washing,cooking and cleaning are whilst the children are at school.
What is the relationship between her and her husband?
I think Valerie struggles to bond with her husband because Valerie is hesitate about him because of the way her husband treats her such as his 'fat hard hands in bed at night'. Valerie says that her is a 'rough dog' which I think it means that her husband is using her for sex which is horrible to think about for Valerie. If Valerie had a choice she would leave her husband but then she would feel guilty and want to come back. She feels confused about what she wants to do because she saying 'I blame but I dont blame him'.
Religion
I think that Valerie is a Christian because she prays for money and asking for money from her friends and neighbours. The neighbours are Christian because when they ask to help they are there to help for Valerie and that is a reference from Bible which is 'Love thy neighbour as you love thy self'. This means that neighbours believe that if Valerie needs money and help the neighbours will help.
Education
Valerie was brought in a poor part of the north which made it very hard to be in school and go to school. Valerie didn't have the best education because of where she lived and the environment around her. She received no qualifications because of the way she was living and her attitude towards school. Now she regrets all of this and she wants her children to have the best education possible so they dont make the same mistake as there mother did.
Religion
I think that Valerie is a Christian because she prays for money and asking for money from her friends and neighbours. The neighbours are Christian because when they ask to help they are there to help for Valerie and that is a reference from Bible which is 'Love thy neighbour as you love thy self'. This means that neighbours believe that if Valerie needs money and help the neighbours will help.
Education
Valerie was brought in a poor part of the north which made it very hard to be in school and go to school. Valerie didn't have the best education because of where she lived and the environment around her. She received no qualifications because of the way she was living and her attitude towards school. Now she regrets all of this and she wants her children to have the best education possible so they dont make the same mistake as there mother did.
Social Life
Valerie doesn't have a social life because she is always at home looking after the children who she loves very much. She sacrifices her social life because she doesn't want her children being left alone by her husband because he will be "pissed drunk".
Monologue three Much Ado About Nothing by William Shakespeare
Character Profile
Name: Beatrice (niece of Leonato)
Age: 30
Description of character
Beatrice is the niece of Leonato who is a noble man in Messina. She is a feisty character with lots of words to say about certain characters.
What does Beatrice think of the other characters?
'No and if he were I would burn my study' ( Act One Scene one)
Beatrice is uses some of these insults about Benedick to present to other people how much she detests the guy. She makes harsh remarks and comebacks to Benedick. Beatrice doesn't like Benedick as he more of a bachelor man trying to show off in front of everyone and wants to get all the ladies.
'Id rather hear my dog bark at a crow than a man wear he loves me' (Act one scene one)
This is a bold statement coming from Beatrice as she clearly doesn't want anything to do with Benedick. The language shows that Beatrice having a battle with Benedick for her to try and win because she doesn't take no for an answer.
'Taming my wild to thy loving hand
If thou dost love my kindness shall incite thee
To bind us up in a holy band
For others say thou dost deserve for
I believe it better than reportingly' (Beatrice Act 3 scene 1 Beatrice)
However in Act three scene two she expresses her love for Benedick and finally realizes how she feels. She is saying:
'Ill be kind to you from now on, and if you really do love me that kindness will encourage you to seal our love with a wedding band. People say that you deserve my love and I believe it- not just because they've said so'
Interestingly Shakespeare has written this particular monologue in verse to put stress on the certain words to make it sound loving such as 'wild heart and 'thy loving hand'. Previously Beatrice has always spoken in prose to make the harsh sounds stand out.
What do the other characters think of her?
Benedick
Benedick is very masculine character towards Beatrice as he tries to win Beatrice over by passing the insults back and fourth with Beatrice.
'Well you are a rare parrot teacher'
The phrase 'rare parrot teacher' means that Beatrice is instructing Benedick like a parrot would is following the insult that Beatrice said previous.
Why did you choose this piece?
This piece is all about deciding whether Beatrice has fallen in love which is a great piece for me. Also the language is amazing to use. I really enjoy hearing the monologue When I first heard I heard Catherine Tat perform it and I thought that I could get my own twist on how Beatrice was feeling.
What struggles did you have with this piece?
The first struggle was getting to grips with the language and building my confidence to saying like it is second nature. A little struggle were to balance the emotions between loving Benedick and not loving Benedick. This monologue is all about deciding but the last ' for I believe it better than reportingly' really gives that love in Beatrice acting that this is the man for me.
Valerie doesn't have a social life because she is always at home looking after the children who she loves very much. She sacrifices her social life because she doesn't want her children being left alone by her husband because he will be "pissed drunk".
Monologue three Much Ado About Nothing by William Shakespeare
Character Profile
Name: Beatrice (niece of Leonato)
Age: 30
Description of character
Beatrice is the niece of Leonato who is a noble man in Messina. She is a feisty character with lots of words to say about certain characters.
What does Beatrice think of the other characters?
'No and if he were I would burn my study' ( Act One Scene one)
Beatrice is uses some of these insults about Benedick to present to other people how much she detests the guy. She makes harsh remarks and comebacks to Benedick. Beatrice doesn't like Benedick as he more of a bachelor man trying to show off in front of everyone and wants to get all the ladies.
'Id rather hear my dog bark at a crow than a man wear he loves me' (Act one scene one)
This is a bold statement coming from Beatrice as she clearly doesn't want anything to do with Benedick. The language shows that Beatrice having a battle with Benedick for her to try and win because she doesn't take no for an answer.
'Taming my wild to thy loving hand
If thou dost love my kindness shall incite thee
To bind us up in a holy band
For others say thou dost deserve for
I believe it better than reportingly' (Beatrice Act 3 scene 1 Beatrice)
However in Act three scene two she expresses her love for Benedick and finally realizes how she feels. She is saying:
'Ill be kind to you from now on, and if you really do love me that kindness will encourage you to seal our love with a wedding band. People say that you deserve my love and I believe it- not just because they've said so'
Interestingly Shakespeare has written this particular monologue in verse to put stress on the certain words to make it sound loving such as 'wild heart and 'thy loving hand'. Previously Beatrice has always spoken in prose to make the harsh sounds stand out.
What do the other characters think of her?
Benedick
Benedick is very masculine character towards Beatrice as he tries to win Beatrice over by passing the insults back and fourth with Beatrice.
'Well you are a rare parrot teacher'
The phrase 'rare parrot teacher' means that Beatrice is instructing Benedick like a parrot would is following the insult that Beatrice said previous.
Why did you choose this piece?
This piece is all about deciding whether Beatrice has fallen in love which is a great piece for me. Also the language is amazing to use. I really enjoy hearing the monologue When I first heard I heard Catherine Tat perform it and I thought that I could get my own twist on how Beatrice was feeling.
What struggles did you have with this piece?
The first struggle was getting to grips with the language and building my confidence to saying like it is second nature. A little struggle were to balance the emotions between loving Benedick and not loving Benedick. This monologue is all about deciding but the last ' for I believe it better than reportingly' really gives that love in Beatrice acting that this is the man for me.